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Ganito Ka Rin Ba Mag-ENGLISH?

(To whoever gets to understand this letter, congratulations?)

October 1996

To Marife,

I am not surprise or wonder why Dennis leave you why? What reason can you think about but you're very fat body. I thought before that Dennis only use me to his toy but sooner and later I'm realize that he really can't not beared or stomached to be with you anymore because at first, Dennis say he could not stand you're habit of making pakialam all his walks (lakad) and always calling to their house what he got home or this or that.

And then he say he get ashame to me either in school or in his family and then asking you to exercise you're very very, very fat body. But you hate it. Thought you're the most preetiest girls he knows about. What do you think you are "Beautiful Girl" of Jose Mari Chan?

Even you are beautiful face (to your think) you do not have the right to called me whatsoever or else difference name one time or the other for the real purposed to insults my personality because I'm never call you names either in the front of Dennis or in the backs of Dennis, but if you start already to calling me different name, I don't have any other choice but to call you other different name to. Like you are a PIG, FAT, OBESSED, OVERWIGHT, AND UGLY SHAPE girl. Shame to you're body that is to a BUDING.

You can't not blame Dennis for exchanging you to me because I am the more sexier that you when you look to us in the mirror. I'm repeat again that you are like Lozada when she is a girl.

Love,

The sexiest girl of D.M.

P.S.

You say that I'm the bad breathe but who is Dennis want to kissed. Me or you? The final is me. There you go.

MY COMMENT: The writer should just write it in Tagalog to avoid confusion for the addressed person. I'm confused. The grammar is wrong. The tenses of the verb, omg. She should not combine many sentences. I'm not judging her piece that much because I have my flaws too. But her flaws are many. I revised the letter but I think there are mistakes.

October 1996

To Marife,

I am not surprised why Dennis left you. I don't care about the reasons you're thinking, you're just fat. I thought Dennis used me as a toy but later I realized that he couldn't bear it when he's with you in the first place. He said he can't stand the way you check everytime he leaves. Even the way you call to their house when he's at home.

He's ashamed at me either in school or when with the family. He asks you to do some exercise but you don't want to. Do you think you're the prettiest girl he knew? Do you think you're the beautiful girl of Jose Mari Chan?

Even if you're beautiful, you don't have the right to call me whatever name you want to, or insult me with different names. I never called you with other names either in front or at the back of Dennis. But if you call me using different names, I don't have any choice but to call you "pig", "fat", "obese", "overweight", "ugly-shaped girl". Shame on your body.

You can't blame Dennis for choosing me instead of you. It's because I'm sexier that you even if you look in the mirror and compare. You're like the girl version of Lozada.

Love,

The sexiest girl of D.M.

P.S.

Call me "bad breathe" but I know I'm the one Dennis will dare to kiss.